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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The image depicts a combination of a bar graph and a line graph comparing bathing suit sales (in hundred thousands of US dollars) and average temperatures (in Fahrenheit) for New York City in 2012 from January to June. Sales increase from $50,000 in January to $300,000 in June, while temperatures rise from 30°F to 70°F over the same period. May saw the largest sales jump to $250,000. Sales and temperatures show a positive correlation.

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The graph illustrates the sales of bathing suits in Newyork, and how this changed with temperature rise over the first half of 2012.Overall, there was no specific link between the weather and the rate of swimming clothes purchasing, with the latter being higher in the first months.

At the beginning of the year when the temperature stood at an average of 30 F, the bathing suit market was making 10 million dollars. This has experienced a steady growth until March with sales of 15 million as the weather started to get warmer. Interestingly, the numbers had jumped in April, nearly doubling the rate of purchase.

Although the temperature kept getting more and more higher as the year progressed, the demand for bathing suits experienced a massive decline at only around 7 million in May. In June, when the temperature was the highest reaching over 65 F, the swimming suit market was disproportionally reaching its lowest value of less than 2 millions.

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The main features are identified, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons between sales and temperatures are not consistently made.

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The report lacks overall coherence and cohesion. The ideas are not logically organized, and there are issues with paragraphing.

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