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Band 6+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Raman,

How are you? It’s been long time since we had a discussion. I’m so glad that you are planning for a camp holiday and I’ll provide my best advice for that. I am sure you will enjoy this a lot as you are a big admirer of nature and wild life creatures. As you are a very good swimmer, you will also love swimming in chilled flowing river water.

However, you need to be very careful for few things during your trip. Firstly, make sure to keep some medications and first-aid kit with you for health safety. Other than that, don’t forget to use safety equipment while tracking or boating.

You know that I like to spend my vacations in camping in hilly areas a lot, but this year I’m not sure about this as I just got a permanent job in my college. But I will try my best to arrange some time for this trip and i hope that we will enjoy the trip together.

I hope this advice helps you for a wonderful trip and take care.

Best Wishes,

Jagbeer

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task, providing reasons why the friend would enjoy camping, potential disadvantages, and the writer's own willingness to join. The letter is well-structured and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow, which could be improved with more careful editing.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some effective use of descriptive language. There are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated vocabulary could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter contains a few grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and verb tenses. These errors do not significantly hinder comprehension, but could be improved with more careful proofreading.

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