Band 6+: Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.

The report covers the main features and makes comparisons, but there are minor omissions and inaccuracies. For example, the total number of homes is mentioned but not explicitly compared, and the decrease in social renting is stated as 6% (from 23% to 17%) and social housing as 4% (from 6% to 2%), which is correct. However, the report could be more precise by including the actual percentages for each category and noting that social housing is a subset of social renting. Overall, the response is clear and well-structured. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report is well-structured with a clear overview and logical progression. Paragraphing is appropriate. Minor improvements could be made by using more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate, but there is room for more variety and sophistication. For example, 'grew slightly' could be replaced with 'rose moderately' or 'increased gradually'. Try to use a wider range of synonyms and precise terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The grammar is generally correct, but there are minor errors and some repetitive sentence structures. For instance, 'the rate of home ownership increased... while the other categories decreased and remained unchanged' could be rephrased for clarity. Use a mix of simple and complex sentences to enhance fluency.