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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information on the usage of water for agricultural purposes in two different countries between 2000 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph with years 2000 to 2010 on the x-axis and water consumption in cubic meters on the y-axis, ranging from 0 to 2500 m³. Two lines represent Australia and Russia. Australia's consumption starts at 500 m³ in 2000, rises steadily to approximately 1000 m³ in 2005, continues increasing to 1700 m³ by 2010. Russia's consumption begins at 1000 m³ in 2000, peaks at about 1900 m³ in 2003, dips to 1400 m³ in 2005, then ascends to around 2100 m³ in 2010.

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The line chart compares water consumption for agricultural purposes in Australia and Russia from 2000 to 2010. Overall Australia’s water consumption increased slightly meanwhile Russia’s water consumption showed fluctations through the ten year period.

The chart illustrates that Australia remained nearly stable between 2000 and 2002. Then in 2003 the water consumption rose dramatically for two years. Starting from 2005 the line began to increase modestly.

In the case of Russia’s graph, it varied considerably. The line increases slightly from 2000 to 2002. Starting from 2002 it sharply rises and reaches its peak value. Following this it reaches its lowest point in 2007. Towards the end of the period Russia’s graph increases and decreases.

Overall, untill 2006 Russia’s water consumption for agricultural purposes was higher then Australia’s. When Russia reached the lowest point, Russia’s water consumptian was lower than Australia’s.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

water: 6

consumption: 5

russia's: 5

australia's: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides a general overview of the water consumption trends in Australia and Russia. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions that affect the overall quality. The description of the trends lacks precision and detail. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and quantities to support your observations. Also, ensure that the key features and fluctuations are accurately represented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. The overview is present but could be more impactful by directly comparing the overall trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, making it harder to follow the specific trends for each country. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs for smoother transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While words like 'fluctuations,' 'dramatically,' and 'modestly' are used, incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific descriptors could enhance the report. For instance, instead of 'increases slightly,' you could use 'experienced a marginal increase.' Also, ensure correct spelling throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors impact clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('a,' 'an,' 'the'). For example, 'Australia's water consumption increased slightly meanwhile Russia's water consumption showed fluctations' contains errors. Proofreading carefully and focusing on sentence structure will improve accuracy.

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