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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The image depicts bar charts comparing percentages of people born in Australia to those born outside Australia, categorized by cities, towns, and rural areas, for the years 1995 and 2010. In 1995, people born in Australia: cities 50%, towns 20%, rural areas 30%; people born outside: cities 60%, towns 10%, rural areas 40%. In 2010, people born in Australia: cities 65%, towns 15%, rural areas 15%; people born outside: cities 80%, towns 10%, rural areas 5%.

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The Bar Chart illustrates the figures of individuals taken birth in Australia and outside the Australia living in different areas that are urban,rural and town in the year 1995 and 2010.

Overall, it can be observed that in Australia and outside the Australia the percentage of birth was increased in the cities . On the other hand, there was a declined in the birth rate of persons in town areas and same followed by the rural areas over the period.

The percentages of birth in the cities of Australia was around 50% in 1995 and increased upto 65% in 2010. However, in the towns and rural areas it was 20% and 30% in 1995 and both decreased upto 15% in 2010.

Furthermore,the rate of birth outside the country in cities remain stable at 60% in both the years.Whereas, in towns it was upto 15% in 1995 and shows a slight fall upto 10% in 2010. In rural areas it was started at the range of 40% decline gradually at 5% till the end of 2010.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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birth: 5

australia: 5

areas: 5

outside: 3

cities: 3

rural: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making relevant comparisons. However, there is room for improvement in terms of the depth of analysis and the precision of the comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some coherence, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The organization of information and the use of cohesive devices could be more effective. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

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5.5

The report uses a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but more precise and sophisticated language could enhance the overall quality. Some word choices could be more accurate and natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The report contains grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly enhance the overall quality.

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