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Band 4+: You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Mr. Ravi,

I am writing this letter requesting to consider me when selecting me the post of Quality Assurance Manager that is mentioned on the board of university. I regard a suitable qualification and hands-on work experience. Extremely, I am fit for the job.

Presently, I am pursuing MBA in your university along with I have completed UG program in our university. Recently, I have done the Accounting and business management course. In addition, my academic records are excellent and I got 92% in last period exam so our institution offered me a scholarship. Hence, I am a surveying scholarship basics.

As you know, I will give the first preference to my studies. So, I am unable to do a full-time job. However, I have six-month experience for quality control role at Dell concern in Delhi. So, I have a capital skill about this job role. Moreover, I will be thankful if you give me the option to attend the interview and I will prove my best and never let you down.

Hope to get positive response from your side.

Your sincerely

S. Prince

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task, such as the reason for writing, education background, and work experience. However, there are some inaccuracies and lack of detail in the response. It would be beneficial to provide more specific reasons for why the student is interested in the Quality Assurance Manager position and how their education and work experience align with the job requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with clarity and organization. The ideas are not consistently linked, and the flow of information could be improved by better paragraphing. Additionally, some sentences are unclear and could be rephrased for better understanding.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More sophisticated and accurate word choices could enhance the overall quality of the letter. Additionally, there are some grammatical errors that affect the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation and sentence construction need improvement for better clarity and accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial.

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