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Band 4+: You are a university student and have noticed that the local community center is offering a weekend assistant coordinator position. Write a letter to the center's director to apply for the role. Include: - why you are interested in this position - what relevant skills or experience you have - what days and times you are available to work.

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Hounurable MR / Mrs Humanity Department

Greeting, Good Morning Mr / Mrs.

I get information from Hall of information, Local community center is offering Weekend Assistant Coordinator Position. I really interest to become one of candidate and really want to be part of Local Community Center.

After weekdays full of learning in campus, different enviroment really make me to get more knowledge. This Position according to my interests, because to be Assistant Coordinator mostly have good personality, on time and always want to learn.

In High school i was command many performing Arts for student, from manage employe, than all run down, my leadership skills become good after that Event. This skills really relate to that position.

I available work in weekend which is saturday and sunday, but sometimes sunday is time to visit my parents in Saint Loco.

im sure im looking forward to know the answer, thankyou so much

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Task Response

The letter addresses the three required points: interest in the position, relevant skills/experience, and availability. However, the response has several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from task achievement. The interest is stated but not clearly justified, the skills/experience are vague and contain errors (e.g., 'command many performing Arts' and 'manage employe'), and the availability is not fully clear due to the conditional statement about Sundays. The tone is informal and contains numerous grammatical and spelling errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure each point is fully developed with clear, accurate details, and proofread for grammar and spelling. Use a more formal and professional tone throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a closing, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and unclear connections between ideas. For example, the shift from expressing interest to describing high school experience is not smooth. The use of paragraphs is inconsistent, and some sentences are incomplete or run-on, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and link ideas with cohesive devices such as 'furthermore', 'in addition', or 'as a result'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and sometimes used inappropriately (e.g., 'command' instead of 'coordinated', 'enviroment' instead of 'environment', 'employe' instead of 'employees'). There is limited range and flexibility, and some phrases are awkward or unclear (e.g., 'Hall of information'). To improve, expand your vocabulary related to job applications and community work, and use more precise and natural expressions. For example, say 'I am highly motivated to apply for this position' instead of 'I really interest to become one of candidate'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('I get information' should be 'I got information'), incorrect verb forms ('I really interest' should be 'I am really interested'), missing articles ('different enviroment' should be 'a different environment'), and punctuation issues (missing commas, capitalization errors). Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with some fragments (e.g., 'This skills really relate to that position.'). To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, review basic grammar rules, and proofread your work carefully.

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