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Band 4+: You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter explain where your friend can get the keys to the apartment give your friend some instructions about using your apartment recommend some places to go

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Dear Anish,

I hope you doing great. I am writing this letter inform you about you came my apartment in that time i am go to a vacation in a month. You don’t worry about that , the apartment key gives to my neighbour his name was Mathew they will give you I also forward your phone number and photo. So when you reach in town you call and he will assist you. I also send his number in your WhatsApp.

I need to mention certain things which you need to take care during my absence. You can use my bedroom because another room ac not working. And if you cook yourself you no need to buy grocery items because I bought some essential items and kept in kitchen cub-board. You can buy vegetables a store near our apartment.

If you have time after the work you will have relax your work pressure if you visit Vagamon its was a nice and very peaceful place which is located 15 km from my apartment. And you should visit the historic temple named as Panachikkadu I think you asked about this temple and this temple surrounded by paddy and a small river. That place very holistic and clam I recommend evening is best time to visit.

I hope you are ok with this arrangements and if you need any further information please let me know.

Your lovingly

Vysakh K S

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

apartment: 3

temple: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining where the friend can get the key to the apartment and recommending some places to go. However, more detailed instructions about using the apartment could have been provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks cohesion. There are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Transition words could be used more effectively to improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using words in the correct context to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including verb tense inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation errors. Focus on improving your grammar accuracy to achieve a higher band score.

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