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Band 8+: You are applying for membership at a local sports club. Write to the club. In your letter • Explain why you would like to join • Explain how you heard / know about this place • Describe some of the sports or activities you would be interested in

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Dear club manager,

I would like to apply for a 4 month membership at your sports club. I have been looking for a sports club in Vancouver that offers cricket for a long time now. I heard from another cricket enthusiast at work that your sports club offers tailored training sessions for cricketers with varying skill levels.

Summer is the ideal time for me to play the sport I love most. Additionally, the all included package will also give me access to the gym and the swimming pool. This is perfect for days when I just want to get light workout done or enjoy cool water on hot summer days.

After summer, I plan to continue at least my gym membership. Please let me know when I can drop by for a tour of your facility. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Raj

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

8.5

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