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Band 5+: You are considering taking a gap year before starting university and need to discuss your plans with your parents. Write a letter to your parents explaining your decision and discussing: - why you want to take a gap year - what activities you plan to do during that year - how you think this experience will benefit your future studies.

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Dear My beloved parents,

I hope you are in good condition. i am writing this letter to discuss about my study plan.

Honestly, i consider to do gap year because i want to join with one of social organization with my friends. We will visit one of village in east java that have impact of earthquake.

I want to be a full time volunter around 6 months, so i can not attend the class 1 periode at university. I know my decision will be effect in my graduation later, but i need an experience to improve my skill in social activity during join the event from the social organization.

I will not take gap year if you do not give me permition, because i also want to listen your opinion about it. May we can open the discusion for my gap year plan soon, because if you agree i will send my curriculum vitae to apply the event.

Thank you.

With love,

Your beloved son

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by outlining the gap year plans, reasons, and potential benefits. However, it could benefit from a more detailed explanation of the planned activities and future benefits.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Some ideas are presented abruptly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would enhance the letter's impact.

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