Band 5+: You are currently living in rented accommodation, but you would like to move to a house with a garden. Write a letter to your landlord requesting permission to move to a different property they own. You should include details about: - why you want to move - the type of property you are looking for - how you will ensure your current rent obligations are met.

The letter addresses all three bullet points required by the task. You have explained the reason for moving (family arriving), the type of property desired (five bedrooms, garden, garage), and the timeframe (before the family arrives). However, the response is somewhat limited in development and contains several grammatical and mechanical errors that occasionally hinder the flow of information. To improve, focus on the following: - **Grammatical Accuracy:** There are several errors in verb tense and sentence structure (e.g., 'I am currently have been living', 'before the my family coming', 'I would be appreciate if could find'). Practicing subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage will help. - **Cohesion and Flow:** While you use some transition words (In addition, Furthermore), some sentences feel disjointed. Try to connect your ideas more smoothly to create a natural progression of thought. - **Vocabulary and Spelling:** Ensure words are spelled correctly (e.g., 'undoubtebly', 'coimg', 'transfere', 'consern') and use more precise vocabulary to describe your needs. - **Tone and Formatting:** Ensure the letter maintains a consistent formal tone throughout. Avoid starting sentences with lowercase letters (e.g., 'i hope').

The letter follows the required structure and addresses all three bullet points from the task. However, the flow of ideas is occasionally disrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors (such as missing spaces after commas and periods). To improve, focus on using smoother transitional phrases and ensuring that each paragraph has a clear, logical progression. Avoid starting sentences with 'But' in formal writing; instead, use 'However'.

You have attempted to use some sophisticated vocabulary (e.g., 'primary objective', 'consequently', 'tranquil'), which is good. However, there are several spelling errors ('undoubtebly', 'coimg', 'transfere', 'consern') and some word choices are unnatural (e.g., 'the kitchen would be big' instead of 'a large kitchen'). Aim to expand your range of collocations and ensure that your word choices fit the formal tone of a letter to a landlord.

Grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with verb tenses (e.g., 'I am currently have been living', 'before the my family coming'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'I would be appreciate if could find'). Work on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of perfect tenses and subordinate clauses, to ensure your meaning is communicated clearly and accurately.