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Band 5+: You are currently taking a course at a college, but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off Say what you want the principal to do.

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Dear Sir

I hope this letter finds you well.

I am a third year student at Kyiv school of Economics. My tutor is Mrs. Watson, and I am a full-time student,living in the college dormitory.

I am writing this letter because I need to have a week off during my studies on April.So, I kindly you to let me have a week off.

I would need to skip a week because I won a free one-week course specializing in IT.It was my dream since I was 13 to have this course. There will be professional teachers. And this course will teach me the important skills which will be useful for me in this college.

When I am come back I will take all my friend’s notes from seminars that I missed and if I miss some tests I will definitely pass them.

I would really appreciate you allowing me to be absent for the week beginning on the 17th of April.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Sofia Kutna

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail could be provided in the explanation of the IT course's benefits.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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