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Band 7+: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Mike,

I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I’m writing to share some exciting news with you about my study plan in your country, and I seek your assistance in finding a suitable job.

Firstly, I’m thrilled to tell you that I’ve been accepted into Cambridge University to pursue my Science diploma there. I’m particularly drawn to this university because of its renowned faculty, cutting-edge facilities, and vibrant campus life.

Since I prepare myself to commence a new chapter in my academic journey, I’m contemplating the notion of taking up a part-time job alongside my studies because I believe that gaining practical work experience will strength my academic learning and provide me with valuable skills that will enhance my abilities in the future.

As I understand that securing employment in a foreign country can be challenging, especially for someone like me, so any advice you could provide would be immensely appreciated whether by searching for vacant or utilizing your relations to employ me .

I’m excited that we can meet soon.

Regards,

Ali

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Overall Band Score

7

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task appropriately by giving details of the study plans, explaining the reason for wanting a part-time job, and suggesting how the friend could help. To improve, consider expanding on how a part-time job will specifically benefit your studies.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized and connected. The use of transition words could further enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

7

There is a good range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. To enhance lexical resource further, try incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7

A wide range of grammatical structures is used with good control. Some minor punctuation adjustments can be made for even greater accuracy.

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