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Band 8+: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Amit,

I hope this letter finds you in great spirits! I am excited to share that I will soon be moving to Canada to pursue my business studies, a dream I’ve long cherished. I’m planning to arrive on the 13th of June, and I would love to share a room with you during my stay, if that works for you. This arrangement would not only provide some company but also allow us to spend more time together, which I greatly look forward to.

The course I’ve enrolled in will span two years, with my first two semesters already covered by my parents. However, I need to manage the fees for the following semesters, as well as daily expenses like rent and bills. To alleviate some financial pressure, I am keen on finding a part-time job while studying.

I have a small favor to ask: could you assist me in crafting a resume? Additionally, if you could recommend some job search websites or local resources, it would be incredibly helpful. I want to make the most of my time and begin looking for work as soon as I arrive.

Thank you in advance for your help! I am eagerly waiting for your response. Please send my regards to your family.

Warmest wishes,

Deep

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Overall Band Score

8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

8

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The study plans, reasons for seeking part-time work, and request for assistance are all clearly communicated.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter flows smoothly and logically. Ideas are well-organized and connected, creating a cohesive and easy-to-follow narrative.

Lexical Resource

8

The vocabulary used is sophisticated and appropriate for the context. There is a good range of vocabulary, demonstrating a strong command of English.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The grammar is accurate and varied, showing a high level of control over complex sentence structures. Minor errors are insignificant and do not detract from the overall quality.

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