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Band 5+: You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week . You want to invite a local artist who is playback singer. Write a letter to him. In your letter Explain the occasion to him Invite him to the party Tell him why you want him to invite

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Dear Mr.JP,

I am writing this letter to invite you to the birthday party of my grandfather that will be held on 18th of November.

As mentioned above this day is very special for me. So, I decide to make this day memorable for him. My family and I decide to organize a great party for him in which we invite only small number of guests because my grandfather doesn’t bare the gathering of large number of people.

The party will be held at our own house that is quite big .I also request you to come in party in order to make the occasion more special. In this party ,you will never fell bore as we decide to play different types of games .

The reason behind invite you to this party is that my grandfather is a biggest fan of you. I decide to give him a surprise by inviting you on his speaker day . He is not only your but my all family members like you alot .

Please accept this invitation and join us.

Yours sincerely

Rupinder

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 6

decide: 4

invite: 3

grandfather: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The occasion is explained, the invitation is clear, and the reason for the invitation is given. However, the response could be more detailed and engaging to achieve a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more sophisticated.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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