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Band 5+: You are hosting a cultural exchange event to introduce your culture to international students and want to invite them. Write a letter to an international student inviting them to the event. You should include details about: - what aspects of your culture you will be showcasing - when and where the event will take place - what they can expect to experience or learn.

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Hello my friends,

I hope you are doing well. I just wanted to introduce you our culture and invite you. Let me give you details about the cultural event that is Orange Festival.

The festival will be located at the Antalya/Turkey. As Antalya has an airport, that is why, you are able to travel with plane. The airport is near to city center and festival area. Orange festival will be organised at the 17th september at this year. The date selection is perfect. Because the wheather neither extremly hot nor cold. Additionally I give you information about the city. Antalya is one of the most beatiful in city in Turkey. The city is famous with Orange Festival and the popolution increases every festival season. The festival will introduce you about agricultural improvements, friuts that is same family with orange, dancing shows and traditional foods.

Anyway, That’s all from me for now. I hope the informations regarding Orange Festival will willing you to come Antalya at the september.

Take care of yourself.

İlyas.

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C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

festival: 7

orange: 5

about: 3

antalya: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting international students to a cultural event and providing some details about it. However, the response includes some irrelevant information (e.g., details about Antalya's airport and general beauty) and lacks a clear, organized structure. To improve, focus on directly addressing the three bullet points in a concise and relevant manner. Ensure the letter maintains a consistent tone and avoids unnecessary details that do not directly relate to the invitation and event specifics.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider using more formal transitions and structuring the information into distinct paragraphs, each addressing a specific aspect of the invitation (e.g., introduction, event details, closing). The connection between sentences within paragraphs needs strengthening to ensure a smoother reading experience.

Lexical Resource

While the vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, there's room to enhance it with more specific and descriptive words related to cultural events and experiences. For instance, instead of 'beatiful in city,' you could use 'picturesque city.' Varying your word choice will make the letter more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impact clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles (a/an/the). Pay close attention to punctuation, especially commas and capitalization. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully will help reduce these errors.

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