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Band 4+: You are hosting a party at your house, and you are worried that the noise will disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter give details about the party. apologise for the potential disturbance. invite them to the party.

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Dear Areeba,

i hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. How was your trip to Thailand? I will catch up soon with you when we meet. However, I’m writing this letter beforehand in order to apologise in advance.

As you know, i have recently graduated from the university. I am a social butterfly and my friends and relatives are very excited about my graduation. They have demanded for a house party at my place. Besides this, i also want to inform you that because of the get-to-gather I will be playing music at the sound system. As your house is just next to mine, I wanted to say sorry in advance because I believe the loud music would be disturbing you. And like always my acquaintances will be coming late henceforth will also be leaving late. So the party would be on for quite late at night.

I hope you will understand my situation and accept my apologies. Moreover, i also want you to join my graduation party and be a part of mu celebration.

Hope to see you soon.

Regards,

Hiba

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by giving details about the party and apologizing for the potential disturbance. However, the invitation to the party is not clearly extended to the neighbor. It would be better to explicitly invite the neighbor to the party as per the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues. The introduction and conclusion are appropriate, but the body paragraphs lack clear organization. Consider restructuring the letter to improve coherence. Additionally, there are some minor grammar and punctuation errors that slightly affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words could be more accurately chosen. Try to incorporate more sophisticated and appropriate vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and accuracy to improve the overall lexical quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Work on improving the accuracy of grammar, sentence structures, and punctuation to elevate the quality of writing. Proofreading the letter carefully can help in identifying and correcting these errors.

Band 4+: You are hosting a party at your house, and you are worried that the noise will disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter give details about the party. apologise for the potential disturbance. invite them to the party.

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