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Band 6+: You are interested in taking a short course at a training centre. Write a letter to the centre. In your letter: • explain which course you are interested in • ask about the course schedule and duration • inquire about the fees and enrolment process

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to take admission in one of the veterinary courses at your college during upcoming semester.

I am a veterinarian by profession. I have decided to improve my animal handling skills, and I would like to enrol for animal handling course at your college.

I am working full time now; can you please inform me about the exact starting date of above mentioned course and how long this course will last? I also need to know about the fees of this course, and it will be great if you could please offer instalments plan.

I have already read most of the instructions for the admission. I am not a fresh graduate, and I passed my veterinary exam in 2017. Therefore, I was wondering if I am still qualifying for the enrolment because the advertisement does not mention any guidelines for experienced veterinarians. Additionally, I am unable to send my credentials through the post office, and I will be uploading them online.

I look forward to receiving an immediate response from you.

Yours’ sincerely,

Adam

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 4

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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear explanation of the course of interest, specific questions about the schedule, fees, and admission requirements, and additional relevant information about the applicant's background. The tone is consistently polite and professional, and the letter is well-organized and easy to understand.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear, and the questions are logically presented. To improve coherence, ensure a smooth flow between ideas by using varied cohesive devices. For instance, in the third paragraph, you could directly link the request for installment plans to your full-time work status for better context.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good understanding of the topic. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to veterinary courses and admission processes. For example, instead of 'improve my animal handling skills,' you could use 'enhance my proficiency in animal handling techniques.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, though there are some areas where accuracy could be improved. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and sentence structure. For example, in the first paragraph, consider rephrasing 'I am writing to take admission' to 'I am writing to inquire about admission' for better grammatical accuracy. Also, ensure correct punctuation throughout the letter.

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