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Band 4+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to an employment.

I hope you doing well. My name is M.Saad. I am a profession mechanic. I live in a Bharuch. It smile city between two mega city Vadodara and Seurat and near bank of river Narmada. I am staying sins my Barth.

Furthermore, there are so many tip of the job but I would like to my on job because this job is interesting and it is my profession. The job is a lots of earn money in future.

I have 8 years’ experience for this job than I can work lots of companies such as Marti, Hyundai, Toyota, and Tata, than I pick up more experience their companies. However, I have a lot of skills for example, making car fast work skills and customer management skills and many more. All car modified by me.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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skills: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more focused and organized. The introduction is a bit vague, and the letter lacks a clear closing statement. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is difficult to follow due to numerous grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the flow of the letter is disrupted.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an inappropriate context. The vocabulary is not always precise or sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors significantly affect the clarity and readability of the letter.

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