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Band 4+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Sir /Madam

I am writing this letter applying for a part time job.Apparently, I saw an open call and would like to be considered as a Marketer.

Frankly , I am a man aged forty years and presently residing in Campbelltown with my family that is spouse and four children. Candidly , I live nearer to your premises and it will only take me 10 minutes walking. Honestly, I wish to be employed buy your organization and as I hold morethan five years experience in marketing.

Truthfully, I work harder each day to meet targets . Personally, I am available to have an interview at any given time during the week.Do not hesitate to contact me if there is anything additional information required.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Faithfully yours

Martin Moore

Word Count: 135

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, it could benefit from a more concise and professional tone. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. The repetitive use of adverbs weakens the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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