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Band 4+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inquire about full time job

I am writing in connection to apply job errands

My name is nur Aisyah and I come from Kalimantan especially to your regards I have found this information from my friends in Jakarta. To be honesty I really interest by this job my reason is I want to have any skill to teach in English language in junior high school not just teach im also have another abilities. I’m faithfully always in doing many job, I have many skill in teaching and I was teacher when I was graduated from senior high school and be service assegment in madura to be English teacher for one year, and I got good remarkable from my guardian in that school, I can be supervisor in any agenda and I’m ability to get connection and responsibelities when I got many work to be in.

I am extremely grateful for your honesty to read my letter

I really appreciate to be writing on this paper

Thank you for opportunity

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

writing: 3

school: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. The job application is not clearly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is difficult to follow due to numerous grammatical errors and poor sentence structure. Improved organization and clearer transitions are needed.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and sophistication. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and understanding. Improved grammar and sentence structure are essential.

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Band 4+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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