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Band 4+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Mam,

I am writing this letter to request you that I am looking for full time job as I have done general arts and science courses from prestigious colleges Conestoga in Canada. That’s why, I am interested in office admin job because it not only make me financially independent but also I can gain a little more experience.

I have alot of skills such knowledge of ms world, excel and I have good communication skills by which, I can crack more deals,multitasking and so on. Thank u so much if u have any job openings for me I will happy to hear back from you.

Your faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and persuasive. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. Some sentences lack clarity and logical connections.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but limited. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter. Improved grammar and sentence structure are needed.

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Band 4+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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