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Band 5+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear sir or madam,

I am Gurleen, I have recently completed my studies at Alexander college. I did 2 years diploma with science field and got 90% marks in finial. I am very flexible as well as hard working. I am looking for part time job.

I have 2 years experience in customer service so, i am looking for job related to my previous experience. I saw your advertisement on indeed about hiring, i saw you are looking for someone for part time. I think i will be a great fit for you.

I worked as a cashier at gas station, also i worked as a gurst service team member at one of clothing store. I have great communication skills, leadership, customer service, efficiency, patience, punctuality, ability to work under pressure, knowledge of products, basic maths and many more. I can do any shift like morning or evenings.

I will be really thankful to you and hope to hear your reply soon.

Thanks and regards,

Gurleen.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

looking: 3

service: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear introduction, outlining the desired job type, and highlighting relevant experience and skills.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences could be structured more effectively for better flow and clarity.

Lexical Resource

A good range of vocabulary is used, demonstrating a good command of English. Some words could be chosen more precisely for greater impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates a good understanding of grammar, there are several errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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