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Band 5+: You are looking for a full time job. Write a letter to an employment agency

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in starting a full-time job.

I am Arsh, recently completed my Human Resources Management diploma from Niagara, and also have experience as an HR intern of 6 months. I have passed my program with 95%.

Apart from this, I have a part-time job as a supervisor at Shell. However, I want to pursue my career as an HR manager in any good company, So I can use the skills which I have learned from my past experiences and learn something new in future.

Hope you may help me find an appropriate opportunity, I am also sending my resume in this email.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon

You’re sincerely, Arsh

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing interest in a full-time position and providing relevant information. However, it could benefit from a more direct and persuasive approach to highlight the candidate's skills and suitability for specific roles. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is generally clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas and paragraphs. The structure is simple, but more sophisticated linking words and phrases would enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range of more precise and impactful vocabulary would strengthen the letter's impact. More descriptive language could be used to showcase the candidate's skills and experience.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly enhance the letter's quality.

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