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Band 5+: You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear Mr. Patel,

I am currently enrolled in Computer Science cource, which is specialized in Big Data Analytics. It has already been a year, since i am enrolled in this course so i am in 3rd semester right now. When I chose to enroll this course, it seemed i would greatly enjoy this journy as this course provides veriety of subjects of mathematics and calculus.

At first, when i took the course, i had expected to enhance my skills in this specialization very quickly, but still i could not get the grasp of many important concepts which is the neccesity to pursue this course further. Because of this, i felt low in confidence and decided to change the course stream.

However, i do not wish to change Computer Science stream, but the specialization. I would like to register in Cyber Security specialization course, because i already have the necessary experience and knowledge to pursue this course further as i had been doing freelancing work for more than a year, when i was only sixteen.

Your Sincerely,

Nishit Patel

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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specialization: 3

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Task Response

6.5

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Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

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Lexical Resource

5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

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