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Band 6+: You are organizing a class reunion dinner for your graduating class. Write a letter to the manager of a local restaurant, enquiring about holding the event at the restaurant. You should include details about: - The approximate number of guests you expect to attend - The date and time you would like to book the restaurant for - Menus or catering options available for large groups

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Good afternoon, Mister! I’m writing to you about book a VIP room for our graduation! We can negotiate the price. This isn’t our entire school’s graduating class, just our class, so we’d like to book a large VIP room!

There will be about 30 of us! Regarding the menu, we’d like a seafood menu, a few unique seafood dishes, and for drinks, some would like sodas, and some would like juices, some would like just a water, no alcohol!

We’ve all agreed on this. I understand that all the seats will be booked until May 31st and June 1st, so we decided in advance to schedule our graduation for May 30th at 9 pm because some of us have plans for May 31st and June 1st, so we all agreed on this date.

I hope we can come to an agreement, and we look forward to your positive response!

Word Count: 149

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the requirements of the task, providing information about the number of guests, the desired date and time, and menu preferences. However, the tone is slightly informal for a letter to a restaurant manager. To improve, maintain a consistently professional tone throughout the letter and ensure clarity in your requests. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider a more formal structure with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing each point in the task, and a concise conclusion. Using more formal language and transitional phrases would also enhance the flow and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it could be more varied and sophisticated. For example, instead of 'book a VIP room,' you could use 'reserve a private dining area.' Expanding your range of vocabulary related to event planning and catering would be beneficial. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. For instance, 'book a VIP room for our graduation!' should be rephrased for better grammar and formality. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction would improve accuracy.

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