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Band 5+: You are organizing a weekend hiking trip with a group of friends and want to invite a colleague who enjoys outdoor activities. Write a letter to your colleague inviting them to the hiking trip. You should include: - The location and dates of the hiking trip - The difficulty level of the hike and any necessary equipment or preparation - An outline of the planned activities

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Hi Haryo,

i had plan with my friend on september for hiking trip for a week, i thought you have same hobbies with me to enjoy outdoor activity like hiking especially, so i want to invite you to join this trip.

This trip will be held on 22 September in Kalitalang and we can meet at my house before we go together to this place. you still remember my house right?

I need to tell you about the difficult level hiking this time, i think its took 3 hours walk and there’s so many big rock and slightly sand, so you must to be careful. Because we just one day trip i think you just need to bring an equipment that you think its important for you like jacket, water, snack, and raincoat.

Met me on 21 september in my house, you can sleep in my house before we going to kalitalang, dont forget to well prepare your body and equipment because the weather gonna so cold and i think its rainny in that area.

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
house: 4
think: 4
september: 3
hiking: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the main points of the task, including the location, date, difficulty, and necessary equipment. However, the outline of planned activities is missing. The tone is generally appropriate, but the organization could be improved for clarity. To improve, include a clear outline of the planned activities and ensure the letter is well-organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each key point: the invitation and purpose, the trip details (location, date), the hike's difficulty and required equipment, and the planned activities. Using transitional phrases can also help connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

5
While the vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, there's room to enhance it with more specific and descriptive words related to hiking and outdoor activities. For example, instead of 'big rock,' you could use 'boulders' or 'rocky terrain.' Varying your word choice will make the letter more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct tense usage. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially commas and apostrophes. Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize errors.

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