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Band 5+: You are planning a holiday and have asked your friend to take care of your home while you are away .Write a leter to your friend.In your letter. tell your friend how long you will be away explain where you will lave the keys describe what they need to do while you are away

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Dear Sony,

How are you?I hope this letter finds you in good health.I am wrting this letter to seek your help,s a part of my vacation for one month in Bangalore.

I planned my vacation from25th December to to 26th January.I will return after 26th of january.I will be available in the phone in case of emergencies.

I am requesting you to do some mhor chores in my absence in my house.Some tasks are to feed my pet dog daily an to water my outdoor plants twice a week also please check out my letter box if any mails are left.I am waiting for a job offer letter from a software company.,so i am requesting you to call me if any letters are seened in my letter box.

I look forwrd to hearing a positive reply fron you

Yours sincerely Angel Sony

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, some aspects could be more thoroughly explained for better clarity and completeness. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

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3.5

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