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Band 4+: You are planning a small get-together at your place next weekend and want to invite a close friend. Write a letter to your friend inviting them. You should include details about: - the reason for the get-together (e.g., celebrating a promotion or just catching up) - what you plan to do (food, games, etc.) - asking what they would like to bring and confirming the time and date.

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Dear friends,how you know i moved to the 11th grade in this year and this is obviously my last year in school.

This year going to be very hard,stressful and the same time interesting and amazing i think.Ask why it’s gonna be complicated because at the end of the school year,i will have a Unified National Test and this is seems scary to me.In turn,i will be preparing hard all year to get a good score.And after i will have my graduation what i’m really looking forward to.Because this graduation will mean that you can breathe out and just relax.

Usually in my school we have graduation in 25th of may.And if it takes place i would like you to come.Because it will be the very important event for my whole life.After ivent we can go my house and have fun.For example we can cook something together like pizza or cookies and watch the movie if you want.

From my side i want to ask you to bring something for our sit-in.You can take a lot of games,speaker or food and dishes.Because i think if all of us will bring something from theirs house fot our sit-in,it will be more funnier and more interesting.Hope you heard me,thank you all

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

graduation: 3

something: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting friends to celebrate a graduation, but it lacks clarity and completeness in several key areas. The achievement is described, but the reason it means a lot is not fully developed. The date is mentioned (25th of May), but the location is vague ('my house') and activities are only briefly suggested. The request for items to bring is present but not specific. The tone is informal and friendly, but the letter contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that detract from clarity. To improve, ensure all three bullet points are clearly and fully addressed, provide more specific details (e.g., exact time, address, planned activities), and proofread for grammar and punctuation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical flow, but the organization could be improved. The introduction is abrupt and lacks a clear greeting. The main points are presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, and the transition between the celebration details and the request for items is not smooth. Consider using clear paragraphs for each main idea and adding linking words to improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some informal and imprecise word choices (e.g., 'sit-in' instead of 'gathering', 'funnier' instead of 'more fun'). There is limited use of descriptive or sophisticated language. To improve, expand your vocabulary and use more precise and varied expressions to convey your ideas more effectively. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter, which affect clarity. Examples include missing commas, incorrect verb forms, and awkward sentence structures. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and proper use of punctuation. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing writing more complex sentences will help.

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