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Band 4+: You are planning a weekend camping trip with your family and want to invite your cousin and their family to join you. Write a letter to your cousin inviting them to the camping trip. You should include details about: - Where the camping trip will be and why it's a good location - When the trip will take place and how long it will last - What activities you have planned and what they should bring.

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Dear cousin,

I’m writing to informe you that i’m gonna be visiting your town next weekend and I would love to meet you there.

Since your city is very big soo i’m planning to be quick in every stop i’m gonna make there so that I can see the much possible I can in this 2 or 3 days trip. To be honest I know nothing about those places soo I was hoping from you to guide me through it, I heard about the palace downtown, the big market, the natural park and the ancient museum.

I know that it would sound silly but i need new shoes and i can’t find a store nearby so please bring me blue ones like the ones appearing in your most recent instagram post so we can hike together and be comfortable.

Knowing that we gonna be using the metro to move and switch places, what are the ones you recommend to visit first and those you suggest to leave last.

Kind regards,

Youcef

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
gonna: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5
The letter addresses the task but has several issues. It mentions the visit and travel by metro, but lacks specific dates and travel method. The request for suggestions is present, but the request for shoes is irrelevant and detracts from the main purpose. The tone is informal and contains grammatical errors. To improve, include clear dates and travel details, focus on activities you'd like to do together, and avoid irrelevant requests. Use a more formal structure and proofread for errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter has a logical structure but lacks clear paragraphing and smooth transitions. Ideas are sometimes jumbled, making it harder to follow. Consider organizing the letter into clear paragraphs: one for travel plans, one for activities, and one for accommodation/sightseeing requests. Use linking words like 'firstly', 'also', and 'finally' to improve flow.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'gonna', 'soo'). There are some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'informe' instead of 'inform', 'switch places' instead of 'get around'). To improve, use a wider range of vocabulary and more formal expressions suitable for a letter to a cousin, such as 'I am planning to', 'I would appreciate', and 'I look forward to'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
There are numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('informe', 'gonna'), missing articles, and punctuation issues. For example, 'i'm' should be 'I'm', and 'soo' should be 'so'. The sentence 'I know that it would sound silly but i need new shoes' is a run-on. Practice using correct tenses and sentence structures. Proofread carefully before submitting.

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