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Band 7+: You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where are you going to do work experience .

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the acceptance and opportunity to intern at your company for the next 3 months.

I graduated from Maritime University, majoring in Environmental Engineering. I always wish to have the chance to participate in the field of industrial wastewater treatment at your automobile manufacturing company. Vin Group is a prestigious, multi-industry leading corporation in Vietnam. Therefore, I am truly honored and excited to start my working experience.

It will be helpful for me to receive information about the tasks that I am responsible for during my time at your company. I have knowledge of analyzing the composition and predicting the flow direction of waste streams to come up with appropriate treatment options. Furthermore, I also expect to improve my teamwork and communication skills; and above all, completing the work on time.

Once again I would say that I am very grateful and look forward to your response!

best regards,

Ngoc Bich.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

9

The letter fully addresses all parts of the task. It is well-organized and clearly communicates the purpose of the internship.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is mostly coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements in flow and paragraphing could enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, used accurately and appropriately. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated for a higher score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter shows a good range of grammatical structures. While mostly accurate, a few minor errors affect the overall fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will enhance the overall score.

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