Letter

Band 5+: You are unhappy with a new sports facility in your town. Write a letter to the local council. Include the following: - Explain why you are not happy with the sports facility - Give suggestions on how the sports facility could be improved - Explain how these improvements would benefit the community

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Dear Maneger of Sport Club,

I hope this message find you well.

I am writhing this email regarding the noice that the sprot club has been making for two weeks because of the new building they are constructing. This construction affects my sleeping time since it is non-stop construction.

I have been awaking all the night time because of the noise of the construction. The lack of sleep has a negative effect on my concentration during my working hours. I cannot focus on my work because I am sleepy. Furthermore, it effects my health. I notice that my blood presure is lower than before. I went to clinic to find out what was the reason, and the doctor said that the lack of rest caused this symtom.

As a result, I would like to request you to coordinate with your team to not work after midnight. This will help both of me and your team to have enough time of rest.

Thank you for understanding me and please let me know if you have any other solutions for this issues.

Sincerely,

Sakkna S.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the writer's dissatisfaction with the sports club's construction noise. It details the changes (construction), how these changes have affected the writer (sleep deprivation, concentration issues, health concerns), and suggests a solution (limiting work hours). To improve, the letter could benefit from more specific details about the construction and its impact, and explore alternative solutions beyond just limiting work hours.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader. For example, you could start a new paragraph when transitioning from describing the problem to explaining its effects. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language to express your dissatisfaction and the impact of the changes. For instance, instead of 'making noise,' you could use 'generating excessive noise.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition of words like 'construction' and 'effect.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles (a/an/the). For example, 'Maneger' should be 'Manager,' 'writhing' should be 'writing,' and 'sprot' should be 'sport.' Also, pay attention to punctuation, especially commas and periods, to ensure sentences are clear and easy to read.

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