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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter * ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are * ask what activities are available * ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear gym manager,

I hope this message find you well. I am writting this letter to inquire about what types of membership are available in your gym and what are the exact cost for that. Since i am new comer in this area i do not know much about your gym so i have other questions also.

Firstly, what kind of activities are available at your gym. I enjoy various activities such as fitness sesions, yoga claases, spin classes and also I prefer to select my routine and food as per activities because i am calory calculated person.

Secondly, if i want to join your gym so could you please explain me what is the joining process for me like, is there any form, onbording process or i need to fill any details online first ? i am looking forward for your response.

Thank you so much for your time,

Sincerely,

Hitanshi Barot

Word Count: 153

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

activities: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, asking about membership types and prices, available activities, and the joining procedure. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not significantly impede understanding. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring consistent accuracy in grammar and word choice.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping related questions together and using clearer transitions between paragraphs. For example, you could dedicate one paragraph to membership inquiries and another to activities and joining procedures. Also, avoid repetitive phrasing like 'I am writting this letter to inquire about what types of membership are available in your gym and what are the exact cost for that.' Try to make it more concise.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'exact cost,' you could use 'specific prices' or 'detailed pricing.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as replacing 'activities' with 'programs' or 'classes' where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'this message find you well' should be 'this message finds you well'), correct article usage (e.g., 'new comer' should be 'a newcomer'), and proper sentence structure. Review and correct these errors to improve the overall accuracy of your writing. Also, be careful with the spelling of words like 'writting' which should be 'writing'.

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