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Band 5+: You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

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Dear sir

I hope this letter finds you well. For a few days i am going to attend to Seoul. I will stay from monday to friday. I am taking a short break so looking for some suggestions and recomendations.

Actually i want to go Namsan tower. I have seen it in korean dramas. I think it gives me drama vibes. And then i would be happy if you suggest me a few restaurants. I have heard there are a lot of great restaurants in Seoul. After eating at restaurant i visit to karaokes. In fact there are many karaokes not only in Saeoul but in many cities especially in South Korea.

In addiction, i would like to know if there is an event or festival or something like that during my stay.

Thanks in advamce foe your suggestions. I will be looking forward for your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Anora

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail and clarity in the requests would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and transitions between ideas. The grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

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