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Band 7+: You are current a student in Loren Bresque University. You want to apply to a post of Quality Assurance Manager, you saw in university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker and: 1. Why are you writing this letter 2. About your education 3. About your work experience and why you are suitable to this work

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Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing to apply for the position of Quality Assurance Manager, recently advertised on the university’s notice board.

I obtained my master’s degree from Brno University of Technology, Faculty of Mechanical Engineering, and I gained my experience with mechanical engineering at the Secondary School of Mechanical and Electrical Engineering in Brno.

I have extensive experience in the engineering industry, especially from secondary school. I have completed a large number of internships. I have worked with: classic lathes, CNC lathes, multi-axis manual machining, CNC horizontal machining, multi-axis CNC machining, cylindrical grinders and surface grinders.

Most recently, I worked at Fermat CZ as Quality Assurance deputy manager. I gained all of the managerial skills and I am able to handle my quality department. If you would like to invite me for an interview, please contact me at the email address referred to below. Thank you for your reply.

Best regards,

David Bily

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

engineering: 4

quality: 3

mechanical: 3

machining: 3

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Task Response

The letter covers all three required points: reason for writing, education, and work experience with suitability. The purpose is clear and the content is relevant. However, there are some omissions and lapses. For instance, the education section focuses on a different university and field (mechanical engineering) rather than the stated Business Administration program at Loren Brusque University, which may seem inconsistent. Additionally, the suitability for the Quality Assurance Manager role could be more explicitly linked to the job requirements. To improve, ensure that the education and experience are directly relevant to the position and the university context, and expand on how your specific skills and achievements make you a strong candidate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is logically organized and easy to follow. The purpose is clearly stated in the opening, followed by education, experience, and suitability. However, the transition between paragraphs could be smoother, and the final paragraph could be more clearly linked to the job requirements. Consider using cohesive devices to connect ideas more explicitly, such as 'In addition to my education...' or 'Furthermore, my experience as...'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of technical terms (e.g., 'CNC lathes', 'multi-axis machining'). However, the range is somewhat limited, and there is some repetition (e.g., 'experience' used multiple times). To improve, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'extensive background', 'proficient in', 'demonstrated leadership', and 'quality assurance methodologies'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate with only minor issues. The letter uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, and punctuation is correct. To reach a higher band, vary sentence structures more and ensure that all verb tenses are consistent. For example, 'I have worked with: classic lathes...' could be rephrased as 'My experience includes working with...' for better flow.

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