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Band 7+: You are current a student in Loren Bresque University. You want to apply to a post of Quality Assurance Manager, you saw in university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker and: 1. Why are you writing this letter 2. About your education 3. About your work experience and why you are suitable to this work

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Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing in response to the job advertisement up on the notice board, and would like to be considered for the Quality Assurance Manager position.

I am currently a Business Administration student at Loren Brusque University. I will finish my Master’s Degree at the end of the month, and have previously graduated with a Bachelor ‘s degree in Business Management in 2023. I look forward to practising the skills acquired during my time at the university.

In parallel to my studies, I have worked as an assistant to the Dean in my first year. I then became the assistant to the previous Quality Assurance Manager at the school for 2 years. I therefore know the expectations for the role and believe I am a strong candidate for the position.

Thank you for considering my application.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Jane Doe

Word Count: 150

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately satisfies the requirements of the task. It is well-organized, clearly states the purpose, details the writer's education and work experience, and explains their suitability for the job. The tone is professional and the language is accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and the purpose is immediately clear. The progression of information is logical, moving from the reason for writing to education and then work experience. To enhance coherence, consider adding transitional phrases to better connect ideas between paragraphs. For example, you could start the third paragraph with 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to my academic qualifications'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate. To further enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more specific vocabulary related to quality assurance and management. For example, instead of 'know the expectations for the role,' you could say 'understand the key performance indicators and quality standards required for the role.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially apostrophes. Overall, the grammatical accuracy is strong.

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