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Band 6+: You are writing to your favorite restaurant to express your dissatisfaction with a recent experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. You should include details about: - what you liked about the restaurant previously - what went wrong during your recent visit, being specific - what you expect them to do about the problem

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To whom it may concern,

I am writing this letter to commend the people behind this restaurant for an excellent service, including such an impeccable taste and presentation of various cuisine.

The massive amount of choices there are is truly satisfying and reflects the price we paid for. Your patience serving people on every table is also top notch. My family and I would like to extend our sincerest gratitude for each of your time.

On the other hand, I would like to suggest some improvements on the allocated seating time per table, as well as the payment method. For future reference, approximately 90 minutes instead of 60 would be great per table. There are a vast amount of options to choose from therefore most are taking their time to eat each delicious food. To add, instead of card only, please reconsider allowing a cash payment too. It is not all the time wherein people carry cards, older people prefer the latter instead.

Overall, it has been a pleasure being a customer at your restaurant. I will surely comeback some other time. Thank you so much for your time and once again, for your service.

Warm regards,

Trisha Ronio

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 4

table: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, including the reason for writing, what the writer likes about the restaurant, and suggestions for improvement. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, consider elaborating slightly more on the positive aspects of the restaurant to further enhance the letter's impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the message is clear. The purpose of the letter is immediately apparent, and the suggestions for improvement are logically presented. To enhance coherence, consider using more explicit transitions between ideas, especially when moving from praise to suggestions. For example, you could use phrases like "However," or "With that being said" to signal a shift in focus. Additionally, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using words like "commend," "impeccable," and "gratitude" effectively. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and descriptive language. For instance, instead of saying "excellent service," you could describe specific aspects of the service that impressed you. Similarly, when discussing the food, use more vivid adjectives to convey your appreciation of the cuisine.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used. While there are some minor errors, they do not significantly impede understanding. To improve grammatical accuracy, pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate article usage. Reviewing and proofreading your work carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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