Letter

Band 5+: You attended a course that did not meet your expectations. Write a letter to the course administrator complaining about the course. You should include details about: - specifics of what you were expecting from the course - explanation of what was lacking or problematic during the course - what resolution you are looking for from the course administrator

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I writing this letter to make a complaint about the Python progamming course I attended last week. For me, this course about Python programming was disappointing and could be more benificial toward people attending it, however it does not meet the standard compared to the other courses elsewhere.

This course was set to run for 4 hours in person, which all of the attendees should be able to seek for understanding by asking any staffs in the area. However, there was not enough time for any people to stop and ask any questions becuase the course was too packed and went through all the course impulsively without any interval to seek for support.

On top of that, I expected that the course would provided me with more insights and more advanced techniques that I can utilize after completed this course. Nevertheless, the course was filled with only the topics that was for beginner and intermediate only and contained too much unuseful information.

Therefore, I would suggest to modify the description of the course for a better understanding of the course what too expect for. Additionally, I also would like the course to implement a better time management.

I hope this feedback would provide you for a better course in the future.

Yours Sincerely,

Jack Dover

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 12

would: 4

better: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, detailing the disappointing aspects of the course, explaining how it failed to meet expectations, and suggesting improvements. The content is relevant and logically organized. To improve, focus on using more precise language and elaborating on the suggestions for improvement to make them more impactful.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping your points more logically and using clearer transitions between paragraphs. For example, you could dedicate one paragraph to each of the three points mentioned in the task instructions: disappointing aspects, unmet expectations, and suggestions for improvement. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that introduces the main idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Try to use more specific words to describe your disappointments and suggestions. For example, instead of saying 'more benificial,' you could say 'more beneficial' or 'more effective.' Also, avoid using informal language or clichés. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and more sophisticated vocabulary related to course content and delivery.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. For example, 'I writing this letter' should be 'I am writing this letter,' and 'more benificial' should be 'more beneficial.' Also, be mindful of sentence structure and avoid run-on sentences. Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors. To improve your grammatical range, practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as complex and compound sentences, while ensuring they are grammatically accurate.

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