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Band 5+: You attended a language course, and felt that it did not meet your expectations. Write a letter to improve the quality of the course for future learners - Explain why you were not satisfied from the course - Suggest some ways to improve, such as teaching methods, materials and the structure of the course - Explain how these changes will improve the course for future learners

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Dear Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to request about course. I have recently attended to your language course and did not feel good.

Firstly, I really was excited to join this course. I found that some teaching methods are not as my expectations. Teaching skills were too traditional and also formed only with lectures. There is not more practically lessons and interesting activities. Additionally, course resources seem more outdated and I think that we focus more grammar rules because it is essential.

In additionally, you do not sadness because I must say these matters or issues. The particular reason for this circumestence, this lesson is not well and need not some rules for students. If you will teach a new method, you and your students can save time. I look forward to hearing a good message.

Your faithfully,

Lucy

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the reasons for dissatisfaction and suggesting improvements. More specific examples and elaboration would strengthen the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow are inconsistent. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance readability and coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. Using more sophisticated and accurate vocabulary would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and understanding. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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