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Band 6+: You attended a language course, and felt that it did not meet your expectations. Write a letter to improve the quality of the course for future learners - Explain why you were not satisfied from the course - Suggest some ways to improve, such as teaching methods, materials and the structure of the course - Explain how these changes will improve the course for future learners

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Dear sir or madam,

The reason why I am writing this letter to you is that I want to complain about teaching methods.

First of all, I would like to explain the root of the issue. Due to improving my listening comprehension, I attended a English course. However, my English teacher did not give more homework. Not only was his methods old and easy, but also some learner was better than my teacher

Secondly, when I learned English from my old teacher, she regularly gave some materials, and the structures of the course. I would be grateful if your teachers could teach with useful materials

Lastly, I would like to tell you that if you do these tasks, learners will know more data. Moreover, they will improve by 78 percent the next month.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Best regards,

Thomas Shelby.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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english: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks depth in explaining the reasons for dissatisfaction and the suggested improvements. More specific examples and detailed explanations would strengthen this aspect. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's structure is somewhat disjointed. Improving the flow and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance coherence. The connection between the points could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter is understandable, there are grammatical inaccuracies and a limited range of grammatical structures. Improving grammatical accuracy and expanding the range of structures used would significantly enhance the score.

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