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Band 4+: You bealive that your local library needs some improvements. Write a letter to the library manager to suggest changes. In your letter; explain why you think the library needs improvements, suggest what changes shoul be made, invite the manager to discuss your suggestions in detail.

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Dear Sir or Madam

I’m going to write you about the important thing which can improve the sigt of our local library. The main reason of why I advice such kind of thing is that the furnuture and tools are very old , in my opinion. So, In my point of view it would be better if you say your empoyees to work at the new desigfn and style of this library. I guess that you may want to know more about it and of course it can be interesting for you to receive explanation and ideas in full version of my thougts. For this I can be like the dog with two tales if you have enougr free time to discuss with me on this theme and of course, I bealive that we could fing the golden best middle of this situation and solve this problem easily with you.

Your sincerly,

Ann Black.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in suggestions for improvement.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is understandable but lacks logical flow and organization. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains some inappropriate word choices. More precise and sophisticated language is needed.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the clarity and overall quality of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy and range are essential.

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