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Band 5+: You bought an electronic device and it is not working properly. Write a letter to the to the manager. - Describe the product you bought - Tell what you do to resolve the problem - Tell manager what you want

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Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing to compalin about the product which I have recently bought.

On December 15, I purchased an electronic device, which is called earhones from your store. I got home after that time and opened the box and tried to connect with my mobile phone in order to check its working or not. I immediately noticed that the earphones was the defectived. The earphones was not providing the sound enough rate. After that, I was very disappointed with this situation as well as I did not expect thias to happen. I tried to connect it several time, but it did not work as I expected. I would like to refund me full of price earphones.

I hereby gratitude for your valuable time as well as prompt attention towards this letter.

I look forward to hearing your response as soon as possible.

sincerely,

Shukurulloh.

Word Count: 148

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but some aspects could be more detailed and clearer. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Numerous grammatical errors impact coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated language would improve the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammar is needed.

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