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Band 6+: You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter explain why you do not like the current programs describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead explain why these programs would be better

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Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my concerns regarding the unwillingness of television programs, which broadcast on ‘CBC’ in the evenings.

I am unhappy regarding the CBC channel which broadcasts entertainment and comedy shows, which are quite tedious. These programs are often longer than usual television shows, which are unexciting for the audience.

It would be very beneficial for the channel company if those comedy programs are exchanged with sports and local news programs. Also, telecasting movies on the weekends is one of my suggestions.

Most families are together to have their dinners at dusk and if they get a chance to stay updated with the world while having dinner, it would be like providing people everything they desire.

I am hoping that you would consider my recommendations for the television shows.

Yours faithfully,

Harmandeep Singh

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

programs: 4

which: 4

television: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by expressing dissatisfaction with the current programs and suggesting alternatives. The reasons for the suggestions are clearly stated. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, and the paragraphs are appropriately structured.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains a few grammatical errors, but these do not significantly hinder comprehension.

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