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Band 7+: You have a full time job and are also taking an evening course several hours week. You feel that you can not continue taking the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter you should - Describe the situation Explain why you cannot continue Say what you intend to do

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Dear Mrs Smith,

My name is Angelina Lee, and I am your student in English course. I am writing to inform you that I am currently unable to continue my evening course.

At the moment, I have a full-time job, and my timetable changes recently. Currently, my job finished at 10 pm. As a result, I have less free time in the evenings and find difficult to attend this course.

Unfortunately, I am not able to continue the course at this time. I think that it will be better for me to stop now rather than miss important lessons.

I would like to ask you if it is possible to reschedule my course to a later date when my schedule becomes less busy.

Thank you for your understanding. I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,Angelina Lee.

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B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, clearly outlining the situation, explaining the reason for discontinuation, and suggesting a desired action. The content is relevant, well-organized, and effectively communicates the message. Excellent work! The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and each paragraph logically progresses the explanation. To improve coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to show cause and effect or to add emphasis.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. To enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and varied vocabulary related to your reasons for leaving the course and your desired actions. For example, instead of 'less free time,' you could use 'limited availability' or 'increased work commitments.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. To further improve, pay attention to sentence structure and word choice to ensure clarity and precision. For example, in the second paragraph, consider rephrasing 'my timetable changes recently' to 'my work schedule has recently changed' for better accuracy.

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