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Band 6+: You have a full time job and are also taking an evening course several hours week. You feel that you can not continue taking the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter you should - Describe the situation Explain why you cannot continue Say what you intend to do

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Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to request the termination of my enrollment in the evening accounting classes.

I have been attending the class for six months because the schedule of course does not coincidence to my job. However, one of my colleagues had resigned so my timetable has changed, this is the main reason that I could not continue your course.

Due to the shortage employee and order deduction, this job is of paramount importance for making a living to me. Furthermore, no one of my colleague could change my shift so I have to stop your class.

I would register the financial classes after my company would be stable in years to come. On the other hand, if one of my colleagues could work my shift, I would come back to the class as soon as possible.

I would appreciate it if you could look into this matter at your earliest convenience.

Best regards,

Trinh.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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would: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, explaining the situation, the reason for leaving the course, and the desired action. There are some minor language errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate English grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The connection between the reasons for leaving the course and the desired actions could be clearer. Consider using more transitional phrases to link your ideas and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are some instances where more precise word choices could enhance the clarity and impact of your message. For example, instead of 'shortage employee,' consider 'staff shortage.' Explore synonyms to add variety and sophistication to your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the,' 'a,' 'an'). For example, 'schedule of course does not coincidence to my job' should be 'course schedule does not coincide with my job.' Proofread carefully and consider using grammar resources to improve accuracy.

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