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Band 4+: You have a full time job and are also taking an evening course several hours week. You feel that you can not continue taking the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter you should - Describe the situation Explain why you cannot continue Say what you intend to do

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Dear Tutor,

I regret to inform you that I do not have time to go for courses, due to I must work to earn money for my life.

I know that I must go to the Spanish courses to improve my skills to become a Spanish famous actor, but now I really don’t have time for that, because I should work to improve my actor abilities to build my future as a fame in my country.

Moreover, I have some problems connected with time. Sometimes, I don’t have time to do my routine. For instance, I cannot sleep,do exercises, walk or look after my pet.

It would be better if we can move lessons time from weekdays to weekends.

All in all, I would be happy to provide you with any additional information from my work and time changes and I would be pleased if you will take it into consideration.

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 3
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Task Response

4
The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant information about becoming a famous Spanish actor. The reasons for not continuing the course are somewhat unclear and repetitive. The suggestion to move the lessons to weekends is relevant, but the overall content is not well-focused. To improve, concentrate on providing clear and concise reasons for withdrawing from the course, and avoid including irrelevant details.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's coherence is weak due to abrupt shifts in focus and a lack of clear transitions between ideas. The paragraphing does not effectively separate distinct points, leading to a somewhat muddled presentation. To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph addresses a single, clear idea and use transitional phrases to link these ideas logically. For example, use phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to' to build upon previous points, and 'Therefore' or 'As a result' to indicate consequences or conclusions.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey the writer's message effectively. There is repetition of simple words and phrases, such as 'have time' and 'work,' which could be replaced with more varied and sophisticated alternatives. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and idiomatic expressions that are appropriate for the context. For instance, instead of 'I don't have time,' you could use 'My schedule is too demanding' or 'I am unable to allocate time.' Expanding your vocabulary and using it accurately will make your writing more engaging and persuasive.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Common errors include incorrect use of articles ('the Spanish famous actor'), awkward phrasing ('due to I must work'), and issues with verb tense and agreement ('I must go' vs. 'I should work'). To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on mastering basic sentence structures and verb tenses. Review the rules for article usage and practice constructing more complex sentences with correct subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully and seeking feedback from a language tutor can also help identify and correct recurring errors.

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