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Band 6+: You have a graduation party next Saturday night . You invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening , which will continue till late night . Letter to neighbour for apologies in advance

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Dear Mrs. Pamela,

I am Jane Brown, one of your neighbour from Carter Avenue. I am writing to inform you that on 19th of December my family is going to organise my graduation party at Saturday night. I am afraid that it might be continue till late.

Basically, I have recently graduated from the University of Toronto as an Commerce major. To celebrate this special occasion, my family is organising a outdoor barbecue dinner and music gala. The party will be start at 8:00 Pm. It will be attended by approximately 50 people including my friends and relatives.

Some of my friends will sing for me . Besides, the event involve some outdoor activities and games. So, I am afraid that the loud noise will disturb your sleep. I would like to apologise in advance for the disturbance. I hope that you will understand the importance of this party for me and my family.

I would love to invite you to join us at the party. Otherwise, you can join us for the dinner some other day.

Yours Sincerely,

Jane Brown

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

7.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by informing the neighbor about the graduation party, explaining the potential for noise disturbance, and offering an apology. Consider adding specific details about measures taken to minimize disruption.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some inconsistencies in the flow of information. Improve the sequencing of details and use cohesive devices more effectively to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but some expressions could be more formal and precise. Explore a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates basic grammatical competency, there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. Review and correct grammatical errors to improve the overall quality of the writing.

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