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Band 5+: You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit

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Dear Grandmother,

First of all, how are you? I hope everything is well. I am so sorry for I have not visited you for a long time. Please forgive me. You know how much I love you. As you know, my schedule is always full. Past two weeks, I was exremely busy because of my business. I had vital meetings in my office and abroad. I need to flew to Germany for 5 days last week for business appointments. When I returned, my daughter was really sick. We had to went hospital. Also my husband was busy too. My house duties were accumulate. Because of these, I could not to come visit you. If you are available, I can come to visit you tomorrow. Moreower my daughter is missed you. She want to visit to you. I am going pick she up from school at 3 pm then we are going to visit you

Yours Sincerely, Nisa

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
visit: 4
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Task Response

6
The letter partially addresses the task by apologizing for not getting in touch with the grandmother sooner, explaining the reasons for being busy, and arranging a time to visit. However, the explanation provided could be more detailed and specific. It would be beneficial to mention the importance of the grandmother in the writer's life and express the intention to spend quality time during the visit.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks proper paragraphing. It would be more organized if the writer separated the introduction, explanation of busyness, and the visit arrangement into distinct paragraphs. Additionally, there are some coherence issues due to abrupt transitions between ideas. Using linking words and phrases could enhance the overall cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5
There is a need for improvement in lexical resource. While some vocabulary is appropriate, there are instances of repetitive language use ('busy' is repeated multiple times). To achieve a higher score, aim to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary and more sophisticated expressions to convey ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5
The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement ('I need to flew'), incorrect verb forms ('had to went'), and tense consistency issues ('my daughter is missed you'). Proofreading for grammar and sentence structure would be beneficial to enhance accuracy.

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