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Band 4+: You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter • Describe the work you have been doing • Explain why you can no longer do this work • Recommend another person who is interested in the work.

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I’m writing this to let you know that I’m going to go abroad for work and I have to leave my current voluntary job. Before leaving I’d like to also offer a candidate who is my friend Alex. He is interested in this unpaid job and has a wish to do it.

I have been working as a guide in this museum and got a lot of experience. I have learnt how to work with people and realised how much effort it needs. But it’s fascinating that I got many historical facts and I will definitally use them in my future work.

I can no longer do this work because I need more money for my family. I have a friend in France and suggested me a good job there. I eventually agreed because of good salary.

I would like to offer my friend Alex for this voluntary job. He is interested in this and asked me for apply. He has a excellent knowledge in terms of the history of Europe. Although he never worked as a guide in museum. But he promised that if it needs to learn more he will absolutally do it.

All the best.

Shokhzod!

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

friend: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task by describing the work done, explaining the inability to continue, and recommending another person. However, the explanation for not being able to continue the work could be more detailed and specific. It would be beneficial to provide a clearer reason for leaving the voluntary work.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between paragraphs. Consider using transitional phrases to improve the flow of ideas. Additionally, the conclusion could be more formal and structured.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter. However, some words are misspelled ('definitally' should be 'definitely', 'absolutally' should be 'absolutely'). Try to vary your vocabulary further and use more sophisticated language to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are some grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement ('he has a excellent knowledge' should be 'he has excellent knowledge'). Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial to improve accuracy.

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