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Band 5+: You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Powell,

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Dear Mr. Powell,

I am writing regarding the invitation I received to attend the networking conference of sales. I require your permission to participate in it.

I got an opportunity to attend a networking event of sales where different sales representatives and prospective buyers are coming. I have been leaning continuously to become a better salesperson, however interacting with real top salesperson will encourage and influence on a high level.

I can acquire new selling techniques and make connections with various people who are the ace in this field. I will consciously approach the lead salesmen to get their advice and befriend them. This event can enhance my skills and abilities. This will eventually benefits the company since my performance will improve after learning new things.

I request you to sponsor my travel costs and allow me to attend this networking conference. I will repay the company with by enhancing profits.

Yours faithfully,

Sukhman K

Word Count: 155

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

attend: 3

networking: 3

sales: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, although the explanation of the conference's benefits could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some sentences could be improved for clarity and flow. Paragraphing is adequate but could be refined to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but some words and phrases could be more formal and sophisticated. There's a slight overuse of informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter uses a range of grammatical structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity and overall impression. More attention to accuracy is needed.

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